Without You...a poem
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Without You
By Tony DeLorger © 2011
How I yearn for you,
when you are gone,
images flashing,
plaguing my mind
with memories
that warm the depths of me.
Each moment we are parted,
exists only in expectation,
the knowledge that we will be again.
Time slows to a torturous hum,
as if in slow-motion,
seconds like minutes,
minutes like hours,
until your touch brings me back,
enlivens my soul to knowing.
Without you I am lost in waiting,
my heartbeat shallow
and my breath a whisper,
words unspoken,
poised, void of expression.
My dreams dissipate,
and all that is left is you,
beside me,
my meaning, my reason,
my revelation.
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Lovely work of passion and love.
Thanks time2rite, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
And thanks to you Audrey, for appreciating my work.
Thanks both for reading and taking the time to comment.
What a beaytiful and full of emotion, poem! I am so little to express an opinion in poetry, but this one has touched my inner self. That I know...
Kind words litsabd, which I very much appreciate. Thanks you for reading and your lovely comment.
Absolutely beautiful words - I could feel the aching of the parted lovers and then the joy of being together again at last.
Thanks Ardie, I'm glad you appreciated my work. Thanks for reading.
cripes... that yearning.... that deep well of .... well of...
Thanks Ardie, a beautiful work. Beautiful.
Thanks for reading and commenting fen.
i love the contrast of the picture...so sad yet she presents a strong personality...simply amazing poem...
Glad you appreciate it ranciniwa, thanks for reading.
Oh my friend, great stuff!! You have got it. IT! You know. Keep writing! Thanks W.
Thanks W. I'm glad you connected. Thanks for reading
time2rite 6 months ago
This is a beautiful poem! Very eloquently you have put words to very strong ties and emotions.