A Youth's First Mark

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By Tony DeLorger

Come Closer from carf Source: flickr.com
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Come Closer from carf Source: flickr.com
Light at the end of the tunnel from pugglesisit Source: flickr.com
Light at the end of the tunnel from pugglesisit Source: flickr.com

A Youth’s First Mark

By Tony DeLorger © 2012


Ever sinning, ever led,

ever rescinding what I’ve said,

ever creating, ever spayed,

ever male, female dead.

Crushed by notions,

of stoic stance,

unbreakable minds,

in big-boy pants.

Societies whims,

forever held,

unleashed in regimes,

in capture meld.

Reluctant parry,

fears so entrenched,

nurtured to spoilt,

in life skills unspent.

Lost and so senseless,

delusions of pain,

in womb, dark, returning,

with nothing to gain.

By force must return to

potential a task,

blind faith implored

to relinquish the mask.

In life there’s a bounty,

for those who embrace,

the bravery of conquest,

abiding the race.

There is a light.


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Jessi10 profile image

Jessi10 Level 5 Commenter 3 months ago

This is touching. I liked the picture. It captures your attention right away.. Great Hub.

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Tony DeLorger Hub Author 3 months ago

Thanks Jessi, much appreciated.

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Phyllis Doyle Level 6 Commenter 3 months ago

Wow! This one is really a shout in the darkness of life. You are such a good poet and always keep me waiting for your next poem, for I love to read them.

Way UP!!!

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Tony DeLorger Hub Author 3 months ago

So glad I continue to impress you with my work. Thanks again Phyllis, and have a great day.

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